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外研版八年级下册英语作文范文

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八年级外研版下册英语模块主题写作PPT课件

 

举例

The Teacher Who Has Influenced Me Most

提示：亲爱的同学们，请你以“The Teacher Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：1.  语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2.  文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。

 

【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：

1. 文体：通过一件事介绍对自己影响最深的一位老师，文体为记叙文。

2. 时态：在介绍老师的外貌、爱好、性格等方面时用一般现在时，在讲述老师对自己产生影响的事时，用一般过去时。

3. 人称：由于描述的是“对自己影响最深的一位老师”，所以文章以第三人称为主；

4. 词数：不少于60词。

 

【写作指导】

对我影响最深的老师

要点提示 素材串联

开头：引出话题 英语老师对我影响最深(influenced me most)

正文：介绍为什么对这位老师印象如此深刻

1. 名字(Miss Li)

2. 外貌描写(tall and beautiful)

3. 爱好(reading and playing sports)

4. 特征(is very patient with; be friendly to)

5. 生病在家，老师帮我补习功课(ill;  teach me)

结尾：总结 想要成为一个老师这样的人(in the future)

 

【高分范文】

The Teacher Who Has Influenced Me Most

Miss Li is the teacher who has influenced me most. 

She is tall and beautiful. She likes reading and playing sports. She is very patient with us. When I make mistakes, she always helps me point them out. After class, she is very friendly to us. Last Wednesday, I was ill and had to stay at home. After school, Miss Li came to my home by bike. She taught me what other students learned in class. I was deeply moved by her. 

My English teacher is not only a good teacher but also a good friend. I want to be a teacher like Miss Li in the future.