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 四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。
  高分作文标志
  1:四级120-150字;六级150—180字;
  2、是否长短句交叉;
  3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
  4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
  下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
  1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
  2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
  如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
  比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that…
  3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
  people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
  下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
  Computer and I By Simmy
  I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
  exceedingly替换very
  thrilling替换exciting
  sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth.
  google替换search
  an army of替换a lot of 
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